Attached is my rough draft, please complete final draft. This essay is a persuasive essay about how the cash bond system in the US is unjust and should be abolished. Please expand on the rough draft provided and follow the guidelines listed below.
Final DraftDue Week 9 and worth 300 pointsInstructions:Your final draft should reflect the work you have done to develop your ideas, identifycounter perspectives, gather credible research, and draft your essay. You will usefeedback from your instructor to review, revise, and edit your draft to ensure that yousubmit your best work.To ensure your final draft is different from your rough draft, follow the steps below.
Step 1RevisionUsing your instructor’s feedback as a guide, remove content that does not supportyour points, and add content where you need more support or where your rough draftwas incomplete. Refine all of your content to improve clarity, idea development, flow,and the overall persuasiveness of your communication. Chapters 8 and 9 of yourWebtext will provide guidance to help ensure you submit your best work.ENG215 Writing Activity 4 (rev. 2018-12) 2
Step 2EditingAfter you finish your content, review your paper to make sure your sentences are clearand error free. Pay attention to grammar, mechanics, punctuation, and formatting.You do not want to distract your audience or negatively impact your credibility withsmall mistakes. Chapter 9 will provide you with guidance to help you avoid thesemistakes.
Section 3Feedback ReflectionRemember to include your feedback reflection after the referencepage. Follow the steps below:1. List the feedback you received on writing activity three2. Explain how you used feedback from writing activity three towrite activity four3. Discuss how the feedback on writing activity three will help youwith future writing
